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Air in my palm
It's like catching
Rain, that’s never wet
Butterfly in mind
Once before my eyes
Tricks of time
Only visions of lies
©2006-2009 ~Shisuku
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I don't know much about poetry, but I like the way the words fit together.

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:iconp00psmith:
simply beautiful :-)

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:iconshisuku:
Thanks ^__^

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One doesn't have to know much about poetry in order to write it; that said, it *can* help to read the works of of poets you admire.

This was lovely.

*smile*

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-- San Francesco di Assisi
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It does sound pretty cool :) You should do more!

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